How to answer UC Personal Insight Questions strategically.

 
 
 

Now that you have some great stories and examples to answer your prompts, learn how to get started the right way. Comet has interviewed UC Admission Officers to gather insights and best practices for each prompt. We’ll help you take the best angle by telling you what UC’s are really asking and why it matters to them. First, some general insights and tips.

 

💡 COMET INSIGHT: UC Readers typically spend 2-3 minutes on your ENTIRE application, which means they are--at best--skimming your essay.

💫 COMET TIP: Make their job easier by:

  • Getting to the point

  • Avoiding flowery writing

  • When applicable, using the CARL Format:

    • CHALLENGE

    • ACTION I TOOK

    • RESULTS OF MY ACTION (keep this positive)

    • LESSONS I LEARNED

💡 COMET INSIGHT: UC Readers want you to limit the focus of your essay to one particular topic. One way to approach these essays is to clearly demonstrate how you check off a factor on their 13 point rubric.

💫 COMET TIP: Make sure your essays focus on:

  • Academic opportunities in California high schools

  • Outstanding performance in one or more academic subject areas

  • Achievements in special projects

  • Improvement in academic performance

  • Special talents, achievements, and awards

  • Participation in educational preparation programs

  • Academic accomplishment in light of life experiences

💡 COMET INSIGHT: You have 8 PIQ’s to choose from. Ultimately, UC’s need to know that you can thrive in UC academic rigor, that you’re community oriented, and that you’re passionate.

💫 COMET TIP: Take the bucket approach to make sure you’re covering all your bases in the 4 PIQ’s you choose. Double check that each response falls into one of the following "buckets":

  1. BUCKET 1 - ACADEMIC: EDUCATIONAL OR CAREER ACHIEVEMENT

  2. BUCKET 2 - PEOPLE: MEANINGFUL CONTRIBUTIONS TO YOUR COMMUNITY AND OTHER PEOPLE

  3. BUCKET 3 - YOU: YOUR UNIQUE TALENTS, SKILLS, OR QUALITIES

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What UC’s are really asking, and why it matters.

Prompt 1 - Leadership: Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes, or contributed to group efforts over time.

  • To write a strong response you should name and focus on your role as a leader. Consider what were you responsible for? What did you do in this role? How did you take initiative? What impact did you make on the people around you? What did you learn?

  • UC’s want to ensure that their potential students will make a positive difference in the communities and organizations they are in. One way candidates truly stand out is by showing they’ve taken a proactive approach when the circumstance comes up . Your responses should reveal your sense of responsibility, intuition, and commitment.

Prompt 2 - Creativity & Problem Solving: Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.

  • How does your experience of creativity play into your sense of self and growth? To write a strong essay, choose when or where you’re most creative and reveal why it’s important to you. What have you been able to do with your creativity or ability to solve problems in a unique way? What character trait does your creative outlet reveal about you? What difference have you made in your own life or in others?

  • UC’s want to ensure those who come through take the time, dedication, and discipline to create something that will help the school stand out. UCs are also renowned hubs of innovation and research--so having students who are invested in solving the world’s most pressing problems is another value of the UC system.

Prompt 3 - Talent & Skills: What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?

  • A talent or skill can be anything from people skills, problem solving skills, a hobby, or a musical/artistic pursuit. To write a strong response, be sure to chart your development of a skill or talent and reflect on why it’s important to you. Does the talent come naturally or have you worked hard to develop this skill or talent? Do you have any memorable shining moments in which you were the star? Or is there a stand-out time that impacted you deeply? Does your talent or skill allow you to stand out in or outside the classroom?

  • UCs want to see their incoming students are not afraid to spend years dedicated to a certain craft or skill--and that they are willing to put in the necessary hard work towards being accomplished in a certain way or that their dogged determination in one skill contributed to the greater good or personal good in some meaningful way.

Prompt 4 - Pursuit or Persistence: Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.

  • This prompt is actually two different prompts merged into one. Choose only ONE aspect to answer (not both!)

    1. Pursuit - Pathways to Your Future: How have you pursued an interest (related to your major) outside of school? Chart your pursuit of an exciting (educational) opportunity that led to personal growth. What cool classes (AP classes, online courses, college courses, bootcamps), competitions, summer programs, student clubs, volunteer work, internships, jobs, etc. have you done and what did this experience teach you and confirm for you? What did you get the chance to do and how did you make the most of it

    2. Persistence - Triumph over Adversity: How have you persisted in school despite facing struggles? How did you rise up when things got tough and what resources, skills, people, or personal characteristics did you call on to help you overcome this challenge? How did facing this barrier help shape who you are today and deepened your sense of resilience?

  • UCs want to see students who are open and say yes to new opportunities or forge pathways for themselves. Given that each campus presents a unique set of arenas in which students can explore, UC readers want to make sure their incoming class will take those chances of a lifetime and make the most of it. Of course, UCs recognize that all students have a different set of personal challenges or obstacles. Survivors matter just as much as stars. The UC is interested in those who can face a challenge, work through their fear and disappointment and find their footing again.

Prompt 5: Significant Challenges: Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?

  • This prompt should be reserved for challenges that impact a student’s safety, mental health, well-being, or even survival. If you want to write about interpersonal challenges, getting a low grade, or not making it on a team--go with a different prompt. To write a compelling response, be sure to describe the challenge and how it derailed you academically (consistent low grades, a period of truancy, etc.) and equally discuss your recovery journey from this seismic shift. What structures of support did you lean on and how did you find yourself again after a period of darkness? What did you learn from pressing forward and how does this shape who you are today?

  • College can be a difficult time full of disappointment, adversity, stressors, and unfortunately even trauma. The UC wants to admit students who are creative, solution-oriented, compassionate with themselves, and willing to rise to a particularly tough challenge. UCs don’t just want those who achieve great things, but also want those who can find great things in themselves and others when all seems lost.

Prompt 6: Academics & Major: Describe your favorite academic subject and explain how it has influenced you.

  • To write a strong response, be sure to name what academic subject you are most passionate about and share what bold choices you’ve made to confirm, further, and deepen that interest. What major-related or subject-based activities have you done in school and out of school? Did you maximize all coursework available related to this subject? Did you seek out volunteer work, internships, clubs, employment, summer programs, community organizations related to this subject and what did you learn from it? Really dig deep into highlighting how you took time and space to affirm your major BEFORE college. Really lean into why you love your favorite subject matter so deeply.

  • UCs want students who are on their way to becoming their future selves. They like seeing students who are passionate about their subject matter go the extra mile to explore it. At the end of the day, UCs want students who are an active participant in establishing and achieving their career goals.

Prompt 7: Community: What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?

  • To write a strong response, be sure to highlight your joyful moments of helping others, investing in them, helping a group solve a problem, or changing and challenging the status quo of a community. Unlike the leadership prompt, this prompt is really asking you to talk about the internal changes you fostered in yourself and others--such as growth in relationships, SEL skills, communication, perspective, and more. Why were you inspired to act? What did you learn from your effort? How did your actions benefit others, the wider community or both? Did you work alone or with others to initiate change in your community?

  • UCs want students who are solution-oriented and look to make a difference no matter how big or how small. UCs like students who notice or are mindful of others, engage with others in a positive and meaningful way, and make deliberate choices to step up, offer support, time, and care in moments of need.

Prompt 8: Supernova: Beyond what has already been shared in your application, what do you believe makes you stand out as a strong candidate for admissions to the University of California?

  • This prompt is best reserved for moments in which you’ve really stood out from others. What are your extraordinary or unusual feats of accomplishment? How has this stand-out experience or quality impacted you?

  • UCs thrive when their student body is diverse, bold, and have unique and amazing stories to tell. Many students have exceptional talents and abilities that show in various walks of life. Whether the choice is big or small, students who shine in unusual ways offer great new opportunities and insights to an incoming student body.

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